Tuesday, October 8, 2013

Writing Challenge

Writing Challenge day 1

here's a link to Writing Challenge what I'm up to now (made by Cakey)

Theme: Pregnant/MPreg
Pairing: Colin Farrell & Jared Leto 
Word count: 817
Rating: K+ (just what I would advice)
Other notes: didn't make it to 1000 words. At least so close. 


"I said I can't see you anymore! I am going to be a father soon, I can't leave him alone" Colin whispered, in fear that someone could hear him. He was alone waiting for his ordered meal in restaurant at his lunch time. He could take the meal with him and eat it at work. Colin was working at music store across the street where he had first time met Jared four years ago when Jared was buying a new acoustic guitar from the store. Now they were having a baby together and Jared was most of the time at home now. He was on 8th month pregnant. Colin had to also be few hours more at work than usually to get the bread on table. Jared's pregnancy had caused hard times in their relationship lately and Colin had affair for five weeks with a woman he met on one night at bar when he and Jared had a fight at home. "No, sorry but it was my mistake in the first place to even look in your way then.. No, see, I love Jared, ok? Bye..." he ended the phone call with her and muttered something. Waitress came by to give his order wrapped up in foil, Colin thanked quickly and took off. On his way out he stepped aside and gave a space for older lady and held a door to her.  She smiled widely and Colin returned a smile and continued his way back to store.
Jared had been very moody during pregnancy and Colin and he had fights few times. But Colin also knew how to please his boyfriend. On his lunch, he made a call to flower shoo and ordered bunch of beautiful dyed roses. They were blue -ish roses. They matched with Jared's blue and grey eyes.
When Colin's day was over, it was already a bit dark outside. He counted money and put the float back in cash register. Then he closed the store and went outside. His dark grey Toyota GT86 (he had also Land Cruiser back at home) was parked at few meters away from music store. He clicked the remote and the lights of his car blinked for a note of un-locking the doors.
He had just got in car and then he remembered the roses. “Oh.. right, the roses …” he muttered and stood up and got back to store. He had to shut off the security alarm by typing four numbers on alarm keyboard. He did it all in few seconds, got flowers, put the alarm on and took off. Again.  “How many times I’m gonna get off from work tonight?” he joked.
Now he really got off.  At last.

On the way home, Colin enjoyed the silence. He didn’t want to open the radio now. He loved music but sometimes it was so nice to just sit in a car in silence, only car’s motor rumbling.
Colin had put up so much with clients and their shit and he was so sick of people after a work day.
He switched to bigger gear and speeded a little to get to drive faster. It started to rain. He put on widescreen wipers to see better forward. It had got even darker than when he was closing store a while ago. Also, that it was fall, colder and warmer air made car’s windows go misty.. He also put on the fan to blow some heat against widescreen.
His phone started to ring in his breast pocket. “Who could it be now?” he sighed and glanced on the screen. “Hi honey”, it was Jared. “Hey. How was your day?” “Uh, as usually. Nothing earthmoving.”, Colin exhaled. “How was yours, are you and baby alright?”, he added. “Yes, yes we are.” Jared answered and sounded a little bit exhausted that could barely being noticed if you didn’t knew him well. “Jared, better not lie to me now, I can hear it from your voice” Colin worried. “Well, I got just little contractions today but we’re okay, really Colin, no need to worry.” Jared insisted.
Colin had been driving 30 minutes now and he was 10 minutes away from home now. He talked with Jared a while and then he noticed he had already came to the yard that leads to his home. “honey I’m at home yard already, see ya in a minute ‘kay?” and he put his phone down.

Colin got to the front door and he was already about to touch the door handle but it moved from his reach and he saw Jared, opening the door to him. “Hi hon” Colin greeted his boyfriend with a kiss. Then he bowed to kiss and hold Jared’s belly “hey there” he spoke to it. They didn’t yet know which gender their baby would be. The wanted to get surprised, what would be better than that.


The End. I mean... to be continued (;

5 comments:

  1. Awww C'mon ... u can't leave it like that :cccc !!!!!
    I want to read the rest of it XDDD
    Me gusta this ficcy ♥

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    1. aHHaah, oh really(okay cool!♥)??? O.o I thought this was jsut so boring..
      WELL then! I would most likely just continue this with another theme ::D

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  2. Awesome fic! I love how sweet Colin was throughout it, and it's neat how you added slight extra car details. =P Anyhoo, I agree, I'd want to read the rest of it xD

    P.s: I figure I should mention I'm a friend of Cakey's and she brought me here. I should probably also mention I'm going to read your other fics if that's alright? =P Good luck with the rest of the challenges!

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    1. Hiii! Awsss, thanks *I did not squeal* X)))
      I'm going to continue this as soon as possible I get Writing Challenge fics finished (or while WChallenge)

      Okayyy well nice to meet you (:
      That's more than alright! :p

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  3. Amazing and Jared Would be the most beautiful pregnant person ever!

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